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idiosyncratic

lips, tucked like
protective lovebirds
nestling silently -

and all the while through the day
I couldn't help myself

i could feel feathers
lightly brushing against my cheeks,
evoking a smile to match yours
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Something a bit forced. I just wanted something new to write for our litfolio. Not really that proud of it. I find it... "cute" I guess.

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:iconanito:
thanks for the comment :) i HATE basing stuff off actual events, haha.

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[You're half a world away but in my mind I whisper every single word you say] -Oceanlab's Sattelite
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It may be a bit forced, but it's poignant. Love the simile of lovebirds. Good job on this one.

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thank you :)

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[You're half a world away but in my mind I whisper every single word you say] -Oceanlab's Sattelite

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